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Weak and Imprecise | Strong and Concise |
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Wolves have always been portrayed as fierce and cold-blooded killers. | The fairy tales of the Grimms brothers are responsible for the perception that wolves are fierce and cold-blooded killers. |
Socialism is the political system best suited for developing countries. | The economy of Ghana would become more efficient if the government took over industry. |
Statistics can be used to say whatever you want. | Advertisers often manipulate data to influence consumer purchasing. |
It's important to save the apes from extinction. | Because apes share many characteristics with human, the United Nations needs to develop more effective means of protecting apes from poachers. |
Creating a thesis statement is not a long process, but there are a few steps involved in refining it.
Broad area assigned by the instructor | |
General area of interest based on your experience, interest, and knowledge. What interests you about the broad area? | |
Preliminary research in the general area of interest. Discover details that may develop into a thesis statement | |
Create a "final" thesis statement, subject to slight revision as you continue to perform in-depth research |
Broad topic: The Vietnam War
Possible general areas:
Escalation of US involvement |
Protest and its influence on US policy |
Social implications of the war |
Notice that the above general areas are still very broad and are probably too large for a college-level research paper. Remember, at this stage in your research you are only looking for an interesting angle related to the broad topic.
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written by Glenn Remelts.
and edited by Jeffrey L. Nyhoff and Nancy Zylstra
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